All Alone
Those intoxicating nights
That relished happiness
The lovely season that came by
Wilted and passed away
That enchanting smile
Those alluring looks
Exquisiteness as of the moon
Vanished from sight
That destination lost
That moonlight invisible
I am here
Left all alone
With endless love
Promised and pledged
Never will the hearts separate
As long as the sun rises and moon shines.
Memories brought tears
Filling the eyes
As all hopes
Gone in astray
Thoughts and wonder
Made me weary
I am here
Left all alone
April 21, 2007 at 2:44 pm
yo yo yooooo!! nice post dude!! i mean is this a song or what?
April 21, 2007 at 2:54 pm
nice and sad
April 21, 2007 at 6:39 pm
really beautiful…you should write more often…absolutely loved it…:)
April 22, 2007 at 5:26 am
nice one zero… such happens so often… beautifully brought out…keep writing.
April 22, 2007 at 4:21 pm
really nice..
April 22, 2007 at 4:56 pm
Nice wordings. I like da way u expressed ur feelings. And yeah u should write more often. I like ur work. Tc
April 22, 2007 at 8:11 pm
I’m waiting for the day that you’ll write something more than poerty!
Not that the poetry is bad.
April 22, 2007 at 8:27 pm
Thanks everyone for your lovely comments !!!
Zoe: I write more than poetry
Maybe you should suggest a topic
April 22, 2007 at 9:13 pm
cool..blog dude,,keep it UP..
April 23, 2007 at 3:02 pm
Its beautiful. You did it again! Kudos!
April 24, 2007 at 4:29 pm
Zero: How about writing about not writing poems?
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April 26, 2007 at 1:43 am
awesome poem… super kool
love it.
April 26, 2007 at 11:15 am
Nice poem dude!!
ehehe i like loneliness u know
sometimes