Reminiscences
Not that they flee
Trust and vows
Not that they lose
Love
Not that it entrusts
Betrayal
Not that it hurts
Pain
Not that it’s bitter
You
It’s what I despise forever
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September 18, 2007 at 4:14 am
Simple and deep.
Wonderful as usual
But love this piece more
September 18, 2007 at 4:30 am
oh my… goose pimples.. idont want that sort of hatred
September 18, 2007 at 10:07 am
life is all about hatred…nice piece
September 18, 2007 at 12:33 pm
Nice piece!!
September 18, 2007 at 2:00 pm
Gee…. poetic about hatred. Neat! :>
September 18, 2007 at 5:34 pm
yeah nice poem..
September 19, 2007 at 8:16 am
agree with all =)
September 20, 2007 at 6:13 pm
nice one.. cheers
September 20, 2007 at 6:26 pm
i love this one. its simple but effective.
September 21, 2007 at 1:09 am
whoa… thats like a hate msg to someone
September 21, 2007 at 1:51 am
Thanks everyone for your wonderful comments…
September 21, 2007 at 2:44 pm
simple yet deep….beautiful…keep it up..
September 22, 2007 at 4:51 am
You know hatred? I always found u kinda softy.. *ahem* nice one…
September 24, 2007 at 3:23 am
hmm i dont really get this poem… i’m actually not sure i like it.. but yeah kinda cool
so what are u trying to say?
September 24, 2007 at 3:34 am
Thanks maldivianpoet
Niish, there are 2 sides on every coin…
Dhiyey, I suggest you read it again…when you get yourself into the words, u’d know what it is…