Stay Back
Are you leaving?
I ask
As tears fill my eyes
You wiped away your tears
I wish you would stay back
As my pathetic heart is filled with agony
Sorrow prevail your absence
You wiped away your tears
Annihilated the palace
Fostered by love
And I plead
After making you weep
Happiness vanished from life
Entrapped in the corners of nowhere
As your name cannot be parted from my memories
I’m telling you all this
Wishing you’d stay back with me forever
October 2, 2007 at 9:41 am
wow…nicely written…can feel the grief and pain in it
October 3, 2007 at 3:58 am
insightful as always…
separation… gives you yearning, makes reunions all the more special.
October 3, 2007 at 5:20 am
nice!
October 3, 2007 at 10:42 pm
that was sad….
October 3, 2007 at 11:55 pm
touching!
October 5, 2007 at 1:16 am
awwww…….
October 5, 2007 at 1:01 pm
Touching.. Hope the person stays back with you forever….
October 6, 2007 at 6:54 pm
just hang in there buddy……nice and sad poem…it’s sad when someone leaves you…..i get the feeling…keep posting..
October 8, 2007 at 1:35 am
God… This is lovely, coming from you.. Keep writing..
October 8, 2007 at 1:59 am
hi, nice poem!!
October 9, 2007 at 12:34 pm
Impressive!
U got nice work.
October 9, 2007 at 9:15 pm
if some one is trying to leave..the best thing is to let him or her go….
October 10, 2007 at 12:43 am
Thanks ppl… u guys r the best !
October 29, 2007 at 9:56 pm
Aww beautiful!
November 1, 2007 at 8:28 pm
wow, good one, dude…i hope this one does not have anything to do with your real life. Anyways it would have been better if u made the words rhyme…but still your poem is good!
November 1, 2007 at 11:03 pm
nicely written
November 30, 2007 at 1:13 am
wow.. excellent =) flawless.. purely.
February 11, 2008 at 1:25 am
Agony huh? Try slapping yourself a couple of times, it helps to substitute the pain… Afterwards I recommend boxing a chair to loose the extra energy!
February 29, 2008 at 11:05 pm
you really know how to put what you feel into words…
nice work
April 25, 2008 at 3:21 am
wish u the best ..emotional
October 30, 2008 at 5:33 pm
Thanks for sharing your gorgeous artwork. best of luck in life